Here, by way of contrast, is Ray Keene's Times column from 24 August 2012, annotating the eighth game of the classical world championship match between Vladimir Kramnik and Peter Leko played in Dortmund in 2004.
And here is also Ray's Times column for 2 December 2010, annotating the eighth game of the classical world championship match between Vladimir Kramnik and Peter Leko played in Dortmund in 2004.
The similarities are perhaps as evident as the differences, but let us for once be grateful for the differences. For as it happens our subject today isn't plagiarism, necessarily, but - in part - another of Ray's interesting habits, covered here last September, which is sock-puppeting on Amazon.
It just so happens that Ray wrote a book on the Kramnik-Leko match, not that I have a copy of this no doubt informative volume.
Anyway, you may recall the mysterious Hugh Davies, whose enthusiasm for all Ray's works - and indeed for all the works issued by Ray's friends Hardinge Simpole - was recorded on this blog last September. You may also recall that the young Mr Davies' enthusiasm was of such proportions that he didn't even write his own reviews, preferring instead to reproduce the publisher's blurb, presumably finding nothing to quarrel with in what it said.
So it is, indeed, with Ray's book on the 2004 match: we discover, on Amazon, an encomium from Hugh Davies
which just happens to resemble the Hardinge Simpole blurb.
As I say, let us for once be grateful for the differences.
That's the thing you notice about Ray (who I still don't think actually is "Hugh Davies"). Wherever he goes, there's always a trail of copy-and-paste. A very noticeable trail.
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Oh yeah - I forgot to mention that Ray also annotated this game in the Spectator, in a column entitled "Marshall Plan" which appeared in the issue dated October 16 2004.
In his note to Black's fifteenth, he advises:
The point of 15 . . . g5 is to stop Rh4while his note to White's twenty-second reads, in full:
This is still part of Kramnik's preparation, but the champion has completely misjudged the situation. White must play 22 Ne4 Nxc4 23 fxe4 when 23...Bxe4 24 axb5 axb5 (24...Bd3 fails to 25 Bxf7+) 25 Bxg5 is in White's favour. Black has to play 22 Nc4 Bxe4 23 fxe4 Nxe4 with equality.White's twenty-fourth is annotated thus:
White must now try to survive by 24 bxa6 Rxf2 25 Kxf2 Qh5 26 Ke3 Bxa6 27 Rxa6 Qxh2 when there is still some resistance left. In this line 26 Kg1 loses to 26...Qh3 27 a7 Bxg3 28 a8Q+ Kg7 29 hxg3 Qxg3+ 30 Kh1 g4 31 Qxc6 Qh3 + 32 Kg1 g3and Black's twenty-sixth as follows:
Kramnik had underestimated this. If now 26 a7 Qe3+ 27 Kg2 Bxf3+ 28 Nxf3 Qe2+ 29 Kg1 Ng4 30 a8Q+ Kg7 31 Qxc6 Qf2+ 32 Kh1 Qf1+ 33 Ng1 Nf2 mate. Alternatively 30 Be3 Nxe3 31 a8Q+ Kg7 32 Nh4 gxh4 33 Qxc6 hxg3 34 hxg3 Bxg3 and mate follows. White can also play 26 Bc4 Qe3+ 27 Kg2 g4 28 f4 Ne4 29 a7 Qf2+ 30 Kh1 Nxd2 31 a8Q+ Kg7 when White has no defence.Finally, Black's twenty-eighth:
Even stronger than 28...Qxf3.Matter of fact, that last note is rendered differently in all three Times columns, but I like the one from 2012, where "[the] final sacrifice lays White's position to waste". If only because it reminds me that Ray wastes nothing if he can help it. Everything is used again.
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It's a noteworthy curiosity that, despite annotating the game at least four times, Ray misses the main story of the game, which was the error made by Kramnik's seconds in their computer analysis of the opening, causing Kramnik to select a variation which, as Leko was able to show, was actually losing for him.
Given Ray's own record as a second, maybe he was inclined to overlook the error. Still, one wonders how long a football correspondent would last if they wrote, say, about the England-Germany match of 2010 without mentioning the ball that was over the line without a goal being given. In four different pieces. Some of them years after the event.
Ray himself frequently crosses the line
Ray Keene has been chess correspondent of the Times since 1985.
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